That's cool and awesome of you for exploring this path. Reminds me of Freddie Mercury right now - you still have the contemporary tone but with a lot of classical influence in the stylistic elements of your singing.

Hey sexy beast awesome note separation on those runs in the song.

My comment is that for this style, you are singing too high larynxed. You would need to at least approach those higher notes with a neutral larynx if not a slightly lowered position. You will notice some crazy depth and amazing color to your voice once you start utilizing different larynx positions with full cord closure.

If you can try posting again once you have experimented with different larynx positions, I would love to hear that.

what do you mean you CAN'T lower or raise your larynx on command? I get tone-deaf beginners to do that in the very first lesson!

To think that there is one natural and correct sound to your voice is silly. That is so limiting! there are many different sounds and colors to your voice! the sound and color used should be dictated by the song and genre you are singing in.

why don't you want to explore that?

Oh ok I misunderstood what you were saying there. Just keep in mind that when we are trying to find our 12 o'clock position, and we have been singing at 9 o'clock for years, we have to step out of our comfort zone and experiment to find that true 12 o'clock position. What I mean is don't be afraid to try a darker tone, or brighter tone for that matter, than you are used to because from what I can hear, there is more depth to your voice than you are currently accessing.