sounds awesome!

It is awesome! But if you are looking for nit picky, then I would say that there is a bit too much brightness and brass in your voice especially for a song like this. I would work on being in more of the warm and deep quality in your voice at times.

I thought you sounded very good. I can agree with Adam about some color but only because he mentioned it...now it seems like a good idea just to add some interest. I like contour

Personally, I prefer hearing this with music rather than acapella. I need to feel and hear how the vocals blend with the music. The only minor point here is, I'm not sure if you have an accent (ESL) or it was the vowel shading. Some words I couldn't quite hear clearly and I felt it was due to overshading vowels. Or, perhaps an accent. Minor details really....sorry

Overall it was excellent. Thumbs up from me.

I didn't listen when you first posted because the original link didn't work. Still doesn't.
I didn't know you posted these new song samples.