I liked it and I think your singing is very good. If I had one thing to say that struck me as a possible improvement it would be on the chorus. I'm not sure if it is too strong or if one line is too weak. I'll explain:
You seem to be singing the chorus strong but in the middle where it says "stand tall" that part doesn't match and comes off (to me) a bit weak on the word tall. Because of the strength of the rest of it that weaker part stands out more to my ears. But of course these are only minor/possible improvement notes. If you sang that out somewhere I'm sure everyone would love it

I thought it was very good. My point is just a small one.

If I can get a little more nit picky, I would like a better recording with less reverb so I can appreciate your voice/tone more. It sounds like your singing in a big empty room and the ambiance is way too much ( for me). That's just my opinion. I don't know if it's the room your in or an added mixing effect you added. Your voice is nice and I'd like to hear more "you!"

Tommy