Hello and welcome Kimberly.

I've listened to the first and second recordings.

The first has some issues, the ideas are not very defined, I understand what you were trying to do but there are some harmonies that are not matching and some pitch issues. I think you can work more on it and get it be more tight.

Which is what happens on your second song. To me it sounds good, interesting melody and riffs, you have a plesant voice, I think there is a lot of potential there. Cool song btw. Have you ever taken voice lessons?

Felipe