A bit raw, in special when you need to go a bit higher it sounds a bit insecure. But you got a lot of details well.

Keep at it. I advice taking some lessons. A good study on support and you will nail this ( I bet it will sound awesome).

Good luck!

I found your clip interesting. I hear a lot of potential in your voce and I think you can sing but just need some training. It's a bit odd in that the first half of the song sounded a bit rounded and I almost thought you might have had a little training or at least some intro to classical vowel mod. Then half way through your voice changed. It didn't sound bad but it was different (not as rounded) as the beginning. Strange. But overall it kind of sounded like you were trying to imitate a certain sound or vocal performance. Sort of "show like." There were a few pitchy spots but it wasn't too bad. If you want to pursue this and begin training then your off to a decent start imo.

I'd be interested in hearing a more popular song sung in a regular singing/pop vocal. Rock, soul, r&b, country, pop whatever floats you boat.

I'm not a teacher but, if I can help in anyway in pointing you in any direction I'll try to do what I can.

Any feedback most welcome guys. Thanks!