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1:48 pm
September 8, 2014
Practice is good, even if you know a song inside and out. Don't take anything for granted. This passed November I was going away for about 10 days 7 or 8 of which I'd be singing three or four songs per night. Typically I practice and rehearse which consists of my usual vocal workouts and very much singing my songs repeatedly. It also includes recording and listening back. "My Girl" by the Temptations is a song I sing without much thought as I've done it so many times. However, over time I've noticed that it is deceptive and although I know it well it can very easily get away from me. There are specific nuances to it that is typical of David Ruffin and can screw you up. There is also a specific beat and timing on this song all combined with how "I prefer to sing it." That last quoted line is important here.
So, a few weeks before my adventure I started my usual routine of practice and I recorded a few tunes. "I Wish It Would Rain" was one of my practice runs and I posted that run through here. Another one, and the focus of this post was " My Girl." As I said earlier, I've sung this song hundreds of times....thousands? So when I recorded it during this particular practice session I felt good about it. Looking back I can remember a lot of thought while singing concerning technique and things I was looking to do during the song. I think this may have gotten in the way. "Don't think...just sing." But it was practice after all. Well, kind of. I was half thinking of recording it to keep.
Singing it I felt good. Like I was "on." But when I listened back I was like...WTF? Holly crap, is that me? It's a good thing I didn't just go with "ahh hell, I've sung this song so many times I don't need to practice it." It wasn't how "I Like to sing it." That important sentence. I must have been too comfortable. Actually it was all wrong not just for my liking but the song was full of holes. It was an awakening and since then this song has taken on a whole new perspective and I have a whole new respect for it. It isn't as simple as it seems and I approach it differently now. But how easy it would have been to go unnoticed!! I happened to listen to the recording today as I came across it looking through files and thought I'd post about it as an experience. We continue to learn don't we. Even after we think we learned something. It's just another level to build upon.
I am posting the recording here and I won't mention the bad points but will let you guys rip it apart. Some of the points are my own personal dislikes based on how "I" like to do this song. But others are just...well...it's why we practice and rehearse! To get it "right!" So you listen and maybe there are other points besides the ones that hit me in the face!
Have at it.
"It's not how many notes you know. It's what you do with them."
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September 8, 2014
quentin said
Sounds good man! I like the tone and feeling, the song suits well your voice.
On the mix, it sounds a bit dry. Maybe a little reverb would be fine, but i really don't know if it is recommended for this kind of song.
I appreciate that Quentin, but the song isn't right This would have to be a do over and I'll explain soon.
But the blessing of recording first allows me to hear it. Maybe some things are small points but I believe they improve the performance . I'll explain later my dislikes of this recording.
"It's not how many notes you know. It's what you do with them."
7:41 am
November 11, 2014
Sorry I didn't read what you wrote in the beginning... too much text lol
Anyway I took a listen. It's really not that bad! For me the main problem is the delivery is a bit too "talky" for lack of a better word. What I mean by that is you need more attention on how you form and shape your phrases. A good sense of legato will help you with that. Singing ballads should help you as well.
8:08 am
September 8, 2014
Sexy Beast said
Sorry I didn't read what you wrote in the beginning... too much text lol
Anyway I took a listen. It's really not that bad! For me the main problem is the delivery is a bit too "talky" for lack of a better word. What I mean by that is you need more attention on how you form and shape your phrases. A good sense of legato will help you with that. Singing ballads should help you as well.
Actually that's one of the points that is wrong for my approach to this song and how the original is. Accept its the opposite (imo) of what you stated. I think it isn't talky enough. The phrases are too long for the beat.
On the chorus where it goes "I guess you say, what can make me feel this way." There is a definite stacatto beat there that makes that phrase...more "talky" if you will. Bum, bum, bum, bum. "I...Guess..You'd...say. But here I am extending the word "guess" (as well as other words) where it needs to be more chopped. I'm singing "Iyeee Guessss Youuud say. That doesn't fit the beat. The whole song ended up that way and the timing is off due to it.
At 1:25 the falsetto went wacky! It was too breathy from how I normally like to do it for this tune and too long. Also I lost the "oooo" and it became more shaded to an uu or even a soft i sound as in "ill" or "it" where it should have been oo. The sound I did was more towards a smile feel than ooo lips.
Just a couple of points.
"It's not how many notes you know. It's what you do with them."
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